This week we are going swimming so we don't
drown but most of us drown any way on the
way we have to play the silent game or talk to
the people next to us when we get there we
some times get to get changed straight away
and other times we have to do a bit of work
and then get changed and then we get told a
safety message and then do a roll to see who
is there and then we hop into the pool and first
i was in the 2 best group and then i got put up
and now I'm in the top group
drown but most of us drown any way on the
way we have to play the silent game or talk to
the people next to us when we get there we
some times get to get changed straight away
and other times we have to do a bit of work
and then get changed and then we get told a
safety message and then do a roll to see who
is there and then we hop into the pool and first
i was in the 2 best group and then i got put up
and now I'm in the top group
hey brad
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i wish to read a bit more describing words in the furture